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please write in High school level like “The reflection paper is about what happened during class. When it started, the teacher asked if we read the article that is called What Students Really Need to Hear. Some of us gave a summary or view that in general a teacher cares for his students as he encourages them to work harder to have a successful life, instead of quitting class. It means to me a lot since it’s related to the internship which makes it serious work and will show a good ;impression on the person’s resume. The internship helps people learn how to work in the right way. The Workforce Recruitment Program or WRP works on proving all the companies that college deaf students can work with their abilities and many of them get job opportunities throughout WRP. A network and technology may be powerful because it helps us connect with other companies which helps us get a job any place over the world, although a brownie is to tend to follow other people instead of your own opinion, it might make people in a work place to be honored and trusted as a good team. I am concerned about the brownie. It may not be a good idea–I don’t like it because I believe in my peaceful opinion so that we can discuss to solve a problem.” (easy grammar, thank you)